Monday, November 26, 2012

Strange Thoughts


Authors Note: This is my creative ending to 3:15. I think that this will be the ending to the story, because I used evidence from the story. 

Cody runs back home to melt the hook into a golden brick. His run down shack has a musty smell, and the floorboards creak as he treads along. He's getting ready to melt the brick as he hears the leaves rustling outside the door. Then he feels a cold rush of air against his skin. Strange thoughts wander into his mind, but he just pushes them aside and continues on to prepare the materials to melt the hook. But then he swears he sees some sort of shadow pass by the window. As he gets up to check the water suddenly starts running and a drawer opens. Cody sprints to the door but he hears the door latch, and he wiggles the knob frantically. His mind gets swarmed with all kinds of thoughts about what could be happening. But as he turns back to the sink, a knife is floating in the air. And the last thing that the village of Marshall heard that night, was an ear piercing scream. 

2 comments:

  1. CAN YOU REVISE THE TENSE IN WHICH YOU TELL YOUR TALE TO MATCH THE ORIGINAL? YOUR ENDING IS VERY MYSTERIOUS...WELL DONE!

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  2. You are very good at using descriptive words. There is nothing I would change about this piece, especially since you used your evidence from the story

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